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I think that sport is popular all over the world because people want to be healthy. A family becomes more friendly. Sports pull together members of a family. If a person wants TO look athletic and cool heSHE should go in for sports. Sport helps us to keep fit. We can get rid of stress going in for sports. Children become famous and get prizes for winning — competitions. Many sportsmen earn money thanks to THE participation in competitions.

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